Melissa? Minerva?? Luna??? @melerva@mastodon.kitty.systems

Chapter 1 is rewritten. I only changed 19 lines and now the entirety of Chapter 2 has to go.

It's better now though.

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Rewriting everything again to change a minor plot point :D

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Chapter 3 is up!
https://kitty.systems/~melerva/story/book1/03.html

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Chapter 2 is up!

Sorry I rushed things in this chapter. I'll probably go back and lengthen it at some point; split it apart into separate chapters with a bit of filler.

For now, though, I just want the plot to move forward.

https://kitty.systems/~melerva/story/book1/02.html

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Okay I rewrote everything

https://kitty.systems/~melerva/story/book1/01.html

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Chapter 4: The Gentle Prince
https://kitty.systems/~melerva/story/book1/04.html

This chapter is an 11–14-minute read.

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#writing is fun because I'll write a chapter and then go back and decide that instead of being a creepy girl, Saoirse should harbor the soul of a fallen god and be extremely powerful but completely uninterested in using said power and there's nothing stopping me from just rewriting the chapter to make that canon

Rewrote chapters 2 and 3

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If anyone actually reads the stuff I'm #writing, please let me know.
Also, criticism is welcome.

Very happy to report that I looked at a book and my stories look like a book and the dialogue is actually normalish.

And I am not the only person who uses asterisms in the 21st century.

I'll still probably go back and rewrite things as I get better at this but for now I'm doing good, and the rewrites will mainly just be to describe scenery.

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Chapter 3: Rebels is up!
This is a 9–11-minute read: https://kitty.systems/~melerva/story/book1/03.html

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Chapter 2: Forbidden Talents is now up:
https://kitty.systems/~melerva/story/book1/02.html

This is a 10–13 minute read. #writing

#Writing a book set in a hopeful fantasy world centered on overthrowing an empire and saving a utopia

While simultaneously writing a sequel set 50,000 years in the future which is super cyberpunk and dystopian where the main character is the daughter of the other book's main character

Because I can.

I rewrote Chapter 1: Forbidden Talents.

It is now Chapter 1: The Deep End; I split it in half and added more stuff:
https://kitty.systems/~melerva/story/book1/01.html

This chapter is a 7–10 minute read and I have rewritten it several times, but this should hopefully be the last time.

I may add more to it in the future but if I keep messing with it I'll never get anything done!

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I'll be rewriting chapter 1 again

I'm not changing stuff so much as adding more

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You know what time it is?

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