Chapter 1 is rewritten. I only changed 19 lines and now the entirety of Chapter 2 has to go.
It's better now though.
Rewriting everything again to change a minor plot point :D
Chapter 3 is up!
Chapter 2 is up!
Sorry I rushed things in this chapter. I'll probably go back and lengthen it at some point; split it apart into separate chapters with a bit of filler.
For now, though, I just want the plot to move forward.
Okay I rewrote everything
Chapter 4: The Gentle Prince
This chapter is an 11–14-minute read.
#writing is fun because I'll write a chapter and then go back and decide that instead of being a creepy girl, Saoirse should harbor the soul of a fallen god and be extremely powerful but completely uninterested in using said power and there's nothing stopping me from just rewriting the chapter to make that canon
Rewrote chapters 2 and 3
If anyone actually reads the stuff I'm #writing, please let me know.
Also, criticism is welcome.
Very happy to report that I looked at a book and my stories look like a book and the dialogue is actually normalish.
And I am not the only person who uses asterisms in the 21st century.
I'll still probably go back and rewrite things as I get better at this but for now I'm doing good, and the rewrites will mainly just be to describe scenery.
Chapter 3: Rebels is up!
This is a 9–11-minute read: https://kitty.systems/~melerva/story/book1/03.html
Chapter 2: Forbidden Talents is now up:
This is a 10–13 minute read. #writing
#Writing a book set in a hopeful fantasy world centered on overthrowing an empire and saving a utopia
While simultaneously writing a sequel set 50,000 years in the future which is super cyberpunk and dystopian where the main character is the daughter of the other book's main character
Because I can.
I rewrote Chapter 1: Forbidden Talents.
It is now Chapter 1: The Deep End; I split it in half and added more stuff:
This chapter is a 7–10 minute read and I have rewritten it several times, but this should hopefully be the last time.
I may add more to it in the future but if I keep messing with it I'll never get anything done!
I'll be rewriting chapter 1 again
I'm not changing stuff so much as adding more
You know what time it is?
22, she/her, trans, plural
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